Grow Email System
Redesigning a broken onboarding sequence for a fintech growth platform — from 18% open rate to a system that tripled conversions.
What was broken and why
The client had a working product but users weren't sticking around long enough to see its value. I audited their existing email flow and found three core problems killing engagement before it even started.
18% open rate
Subject lines were generic and untested. No personalization, no urgency.
60% drop-off
Most users never activated. Emails arrived too late with no clear next step.
No visual system
Each email looked different. No brand consistency, no trust signals.
Building the system from scratch
Before designing any single email, I built a design system first — tokens, components, layout rules. This made all 8 emails feel like one cohesive product, not 8 separate files.
Design tokens
Brand blue, white, and a strict type scale. Used consistently across all emails.
Component library
Header, hero block, CTA button, footer — built once, reused across all 8 emails.
Sequence logic
Remapped the timing: welcome → verify → activate → upsell. Clear trigger for each step.
Copy direction
Rewrote subject lines and CTAs to be action-oriented and specific, not generic.
A/B tests and what we learned
Before final delivery I ran two rounds of A/B testing on the highest-traffic emails — welcome and upsell. Subject lines and CTA copy were the biggest levers.
Subject: "Welcome to Grow — get started today"
CTA: "Go to dashboard"
Open rate:
31%
Subject: "Your Grow account is ready, [name]"
CTA: "Activate my account"
Open rate:
54%
What actually changed
Measured over 60 days post-launch across all 8 emails. Every key metric improved significantly — and the client renewed for a second project within 3 weeks.
"Before this project, our onboarding emails were an afterthought. Now they're one of the best-performing parts of our funnel. The difference was immediately visible in our numbers."
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