Email Design · Case Study

Grow Email System

Redesigning a broken onboarding sequence for a fintech growth platform — from 18% open rate to a system that tripled conversions.

Fintech Email Design 8 Emails HubSpot 2026
54%
was 18%
Open rate
22%
was 7%
Click rate
3x
tripled
Conversions
8
full system
Emails built
1
2
3
4
Step 01 — Discovery

What was broken and why

The client had a working product but users weren't sticking around long enough to see its value. I audited their existing email flow and found three core problems killing engagement before it even started.

18% open rate

Subject lines were generic and untested. No personalization, no urgency.

60% drop-off

Most users never activated. Emails arrived too late with no clear next step.

No visual system

Each email looked different. No brand consistency, no trust signals.

Key insight: The problem wasn't just design — it was sequence logic. Users were getting the wrong email at the wrong time. The redesign had to fix both the visuals and the flow.
Step 02 — Design

Building the system from scratch

Before designing any single email, I built a design system first — tokens, components, layout rules. This made all 8 emails feel like one cohesive product, not 8 separate files.

Design tokens

Brand blue, white, and a strict type scale. Used consistently across all emails.

Component library

Header, hero block, CTA button, footer — built once, reused across all 8 emails.

Sequence logic

Remapped the timing: welcome → verify → activate → upsell. Clear trigger for each step.

Copy direction

Rewrote subject lines and CTAs to be action-oriented and specific, not generic.

Step 03 — Testing

A/B tests and what we learned

Before final delivery I ran two rounds of A/B testing on the highest-traffic emails — welcome and upsell. Subject lines and CTA copy were the biggest levers.

Version A — original

Subject: "Welcome to Grow — get started today"

CTA: "Go to dashboard"

Open rate: 31%

Version B — tested

Subject: "Your Grow account is ready, [name]"

CTA: "Activate my account"

Open rate: 54%

Version B won — personalization + specific CTA drove 74% more opens than the generic version.
Step 04 — Results

What actually changed

Measured over 60 days post-launch across all 8 emails. Every key metric improved significantly — and the client renewed for a second project within 3 weeks.

54%
was 18%
Open rate
22%
was 7%
Click rate
3x
tripled
Conversions
−40%
improved
Drop-off

"Before this project, our onboarding emails were an afterthought. Now they're one of the best-performing parts of our funnel. The difference was immediately visible in our numbers."

SL
Sara L.
Head of Growth, Grow Platform

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